This fanfic follows the latest episode in which Alyson’s dad finally discover who the other Bata wolf is. Scott is cornered by the vampire he is torn to a decision to either die a human or fight for his life as a werewolf – with the fear of losing Allison’s heart as she helplessly watches on.
It’s that time of the year, where every girl from school puts on her dress preparing to live out the dream of her entire high school experience. That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom.
Alyson and Scott are walking thru the backstage foolishly kissing and groping on each other as young couples do when they’re in love. They eventually reach a spot where they can be intimate as they approach the old school buses. She runs on ahead into the bus teasing him of what’s to come. As she gazes upon him from the bus waiting in anticipation, two bright high beam car lights come from both ends of the bus. Facing directly towards Scott who is just standing there unaware of what’s going to happen next. As both 4WD’s begin to rev up their engines the tensed emotions begin to spark.
Alyson looks on frighten of what’s going on fearing her love could possible lose his life, while Scott looks back and fourth at her and the two drivers as if he has everything under control. Suddenly in a moment both hunters take their feet off the break and slamming onto the accelerators. With Scott cornered in, having no where to run – both cars jam up in between the two buses scrapping the side skirts of the 2 4wd’s
Just before they collide and crash furiously, Scott’s heart rate had already breached the limit of a normal human being activating his inner beast. So as the cars collide he leaps high in the air, both cars missing him by less the half a second – forcing both 4wd’s to crash with him landing on top of both cars. Only for his werewolf form to take shape, revealing his true self to Allyson who is shocked, emotionally distraught and confused. Confused about that the love of her life is the very thing/creature that her family has been hunting for centuries.
To her amazement Alyson steers at him, gripped with fear of the fact that her boyfriend (the first person she’s has ever fallen in love with) is well and truly not human but a Werewolf.
Scott helplessly looks at her in his Werewolf state only to slowly turn back to normal as his heart rate drops back as he sees her (the only one that can keep his abilities intact.)
He whispers to her the only words that could possibly keep her love for him intact
“I LOVE YOU”
She looks at him with tear filled eyes, putting her hand up against the window glass while he Leaps off into the darkness just before her dad and the other hunters shot him with their deadly bullets.
Allyson filled with emotion, slowly walks out the bus very drowsy still in shock of what she just witnessed. Faintly drops into her fathers arms who whispers to her
“It’s going to be ok”
As he looks out into the distance with only one thing on his mind – Kill Scott McColl.
As the night eventually fades away, Scott – not knowing what to do, flees to the forest (the place where he was first bitten)
he begins to holler and shout
“NO”
in pain thinking that Alyson hates him after seeing the beast, as his frustration builds, all the screaming and hollering starts to grow into howling.
Meanwhile Alyson and her father drive home from the school. Her father tries to explain what happened and begins to give her a big lecture on how dangerous Scott is and warns her to stay away from him. Subtly ignoring him, she slips into her own little world. Looking out the window replaying what just happen, over and over again. She begins to question herself . . .
Why didn’t he tell me?
He’s a liar!
Do I still Love him?
Arghh how can I love him when he’s a Warewolf?
Is he really the same Scott?
All these thoughts start to run in her mind . . . .
Hey this is a pretty good read but there I some things I would like to point out. There are some grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes in your fan fiction that you might like to address. For example, thru is through and deacion is decision. You also had "and" as "n". All in all, enjoyed the read, with a few fixes, it will be more enjoyable. :)
ReplyDeletehi, i like your story because it is so simple...
ReplyDeletei love the last paragraph. i can feel the emotions and i felt terribly sorry for her. theres no big words or loads of sad descriptions but i can just feel it.
but as spencer said.. theres quite a lot of txt-language used haha so might be a good idea to correct them in the final.
Excellent story though, love it
hi guys,
ReplyDeleteyeaa thanks for picking that up lol I was kind of just writing it as i would say it. I will note that for when i do up my final copy.
thanks for the feedback. feel free to let me know if i need anything else to work on