Wednesday, September 14, 2011
Friday, August 26, 2011
Mathew's Fanfic
Chapter One - The Dream
The Queen could feel the magic in the world staggering. The flow of magic was so weak that she could barely feel a mere tingle through her coat of fur. As she stared out the window in her tower room she looked over Extalia and wondered what would happen to her people. The moon shone over the city placing a blanket of security over the exceeds. The brightness glazed in shagotte’s eyes. The glow mirrored a deep feeling of calamity and Shagotte was put in a trans. falling to the ground she was suddenly magically lifted onto her bed as if some invisible force were carrying her over.
Queen Shagotte opened her eyes. She was high in the air over extalia but yet she wasn’t. The peaceful extalia had completely changed. There were explosions in the distance with sparks flying to the east of the floating island. One winged she flew towards the chaos only to feel her energy weakening. Her magical wing disappeared which left her plummeting to the ground. Falling at a fast speed she felt like she was losing all control of her mind as well but then a sudden force of natural instinct woke up inside of her. Just as she almost made contact with the ground below, she stopped about 20metres in the air with her one wing supporting her. Surprised, the queen landed on the ground and noticed her people throwing stones at a young girl. A young girl with sweet eyes crying as her deep blue hair was caught in the wind trying to pull her to safety. Yet this girl stood her ground, crying in agonising pain and holding what seemed to be another exceed in her arms, a young thought. This didn’t make sense to her, humans were forbidden to enter in the land of extalia and humans also feared the exceeds.
The girl began to scream. As shagotte neared closer she was frozen in her tracks. All of a sudden the world around her began to change rapidly around her. In the spot she stood hours flew by in minutes and people turned into light headed to where the explosions blasted through the land. As the sun rose there were no more exceeds in the air, the city of extalia was deserted and streams of magical attacks were sent into the air. Then as time moved on a light opened up in the sky and a giant lacrima that held so much magical power vanished into the light. Lacrima, a stone which held magic that humans used disappeared and soon magic all around flitted until there was nothing left. The floating islands around her only floated because of magic, with the magic disappearing they all began to fall. Looking down from where she once stood, the City she called home, was plunging to the ground. Shagotte’s heart began to break, her home would be no more and her people would be in danger of human attacks then it happened, the island of extalia, her city made impact and broke into thousands of pieces. Shagotte screamed with agony.
Chapter 2 – Sacrificial Plan
Waking up with a tearing heart, the queen in her haste began making arrangements. She was scared for her people; she was scared for the Exceeds. She had already suffered a horrible fate now only being able to produce half a set of wings. She did not want those around her to suffer the same fate. Getting out of bed she chucked on her Robe and made her to the cradle that comforted her child, the one thing of the past king left of him to love. Her beloved child that was yet to hatch. She looked down at the egg which began to shake… it seemed like her unborn child was feeling the fears that Shagotte was feeling. Rubbing the egg, Queen Shagotte began to soothe her child
“Shhhhhh, its okay my darling. I will take care of you and everything will be fine, there is no need to worry, you will be alright”
The unhatched egg slowly stopped quivering feeling the warmth a security the queen had given her. With the young egg in her arms she called for a maiden to awaken the elders. She wanted to discuss the dream she had.
In the chamber of the elders shagotte sits there impatiently waiting on the elder’s arrival. In her arms she holds her child, still an egg almost ready to hatch. She begins to wonder what she will do with the child she wishes to see grow up. Knowing about the anima she begins to think about the world they know as earth. Suddenly the elders enter the chamber one by one tired.
“What is this about?” asked Head Elder Hasami
Shagotte turns to look at him and responds
“I had a dream; no it was more of a premonition. One day the kingdom of extalia will fall and we, the Exceeds will be in trouble. Our homes will be destroyed and that is why I have called upon this meeting tonight”
“How do you know my dear? Could it be just another night terror?” asked Elder Hasami
“No, it was much too real to be a night terror. There was a magical force telling me with the human’s limited supply of magic would be our doom. I was put in a trans before this dream. I was looking over the city by window, but when I woke up in panic I found that I was in my bed. There are forces at work and I believe the spirits were telling me so” said Shagotte whilst tears began to trickle down her face
“Oh my! What can we do? Do you know if there is any possible way to prevent it shagotte?” Agonised Elder Hasami
Sadly Shagotte responded “No, I don’t think so, but perhaps instead of saving extalia we could save our the children”
“What do you mean your majesty?” chorused all the Elders
“We could use the anima and send the children to Earthland where magic is plentiful and never ending. The young could live happily there without worry”
Shagotte looked down at her egg then continued
“This is my only child and this tragedy is not her burden bear. We must save our kin and we must act fast”
“hmmm” Elder Hasami muttered
“Say we send our unborn kin to Earthland, what will we tell our people? They will all be in panic then the humans will know a great tragedy is upon us and a war may break out. They may not allow us to use the anima so simply” questioned another Elder
There was a long silence in the room and each member inside the chamber was deep in thought, even the loyal servant, Emissay who at Shagotte’s side was thinking long and hard. The servant excited to seem have an idea and began to speak.
“We will tell our people that there is a mission our kin must do and only them. We will tell them that dragon slayers, magicians from Earthland are closing up anima’s which will stop magic coming here. We will tell our people of their greed. The humans will surely agree to this”
“Yes, they will not question this so much and we will be praised more by our people. This could very well work” responded Elder Hasami
“This is a very good idea Emissay” praised another Elder
“I thank you for your input Emissay, it is much appreciated. I am glad that you understand our position. I am glad we were able to meet at this during an ungodly hour. I needed to discuss my decision before any action would take place. So now we will leave the chamber and prepare.” thanked Queen Shagotte
When the Elders had left the chamber Shagotte sat there staring at her child with her loyal servant by her side waiting for her next command.
“Emissay” Shagotte started “send a messenger to the king of edolus and inform him of our plans. then prepare the guards and servants to go to houses with unborn kin and collect 99 of them at dawn, please tell the parent’s of these exceeds the story of their mission. Have the kin stored in a crate ready to be sent off to Earthland. Then the following day I will make a public announcement and tell the people of how Extalia will be destroyed if these brave unborn do not make the journey to Earthland. That is all”
Emissay rushed out of the chamber to do the Queen’s bidding. Shagotte still in her seat began to sob louder and sat there till had gone.
To Be Continued
Friday, August 19, 2011
Sheldon's Fan-Fiction (Final)
This Fan-fiction follows the latest episode of Teen Wolf in which Alyson’s dad finally discovers who the other Bata wolf is. Scott is cornered by the hunters, torn with the decision to either die a human or fight for his life as a werewolf – with the fear of losing Allison’s heart as she helplessly watches on.
It’s that time of the year, where every girl from school puts on her dress preparing to live out the dream of her entire high school experience. That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom. Its that time of the year were both guys and gals have the freedom to dance the night away as if it was the last night of their lives.
As the night seemingly progressed, Alyson and Scott more got closer as they slowly dance to the ever sweet jam’s, all the while growing more intimate and affectionate. Alyson turns to Scott and says;
“You wana get outta here?”
‘’Yea, what do you have in mind?” he replied.
She responded, “You’ll see” with a flirty promiscuous smile on her face.
So there they are, walking thru the back area of the auditorium. Foolishly kissing and groping on each other as young couples do when they’re in love. They eventually reach a spot where they can be intimate as they approach the old school buses parralell to each other. She runs on ahead into the bus teasing him of what’s to come. She takes a good look at him from the bus waiting in anticipation, so he phsycs himself up to get ready for the night of his life.
Just before he turns to hop into the bus two bright high beam car lights of a 4WD come from both ends of the bus. Facing directly towards Scott who is just standing there unaware of what’s going to happen next.
Both 4WD’s begin to rev up their engines, the tensed emotions begin to spark.
Alyson looks on frighten and confused of what’s going on, fearing for Scott who could possible get hurt, while Scott looks back and fourth at her and the two drivers as if he has everything under control. Suddenly in a moment both hunters take their feet off the break slamming onto the accelerators. With Scott cornered in, having no where to run – both cars jam up in between the two buses scrapping the side skirts of the two 4wd’s.
Just before they collide and crash furiously, Scott’s heart rate had already breached the limit of a normal human being activating his inner beast. So as the cars collide he leaps high in the air, both cars missing him by less the half a second – forcing both 4wd’s to crash with him landing on top of both cars. But with his werewolf form taking shape, revealing his true self to Allyson who is shocked, emotionally distraught and confused. Confused about that the love of her life is the very thing/creature that her family has been hunting for centuries.
To her amazement Alyson steers at him, gripped with fear of the fact that her boyfriend (the first person she’s has ever fallen in love with) is well and truly not human but a Werewolf.
Scott helplessly looks at her in his Werewolf state only to slowly turn back to normal as his heart rate drops back as he sees her (the only one that can keep his abilities intact.)
He whispers to her the only words that could possibly think of.
“I LOVE YOU”
She looks at him with tear filled eyes, putting her hand up against the window glass while he Leaps off into the darkness just before Alyson’s and the other hunters shot him with their deadly bullets.
Alyson filled with emotion, slowly walks out the bus very drowsy still in shock of what she just witnessed. Faintly drops into her fathers arms who whispers to her “It’s going to be ok”As he looks out into the distance with only one thing on his mind – Kill Scott McColl.
As the night eventually fades away, Scott – not knowing what to do, flees to the forest (the place where he was first bitten) he begins to holler and shout “NO” in pain thinking that Alyson hates him after seeing the beast, as his frustration builds, all the screaming and hollering starts to grow into howling.
Meanwhile Alyson and her father drive home from the school. Her father tries to explain what happened and begins to give her a big lecture on how dangerous Scott is and warns her to stay away from him. Subtly ignoring him, she slips into her own little world. Looking out the window replaying what just happen, over and over again.
She begins to question herself.
Why didn’t he tell me?
He’s a liar!
Do I still Love him?
Arghh how can I love him when he’s a Warewolf?
Is he really the same Scott?
All these thoughts start to run in her mind but one thing’s still remains . . .
She can’t help but love him.
Spencer's Final Fanfic
There’s more of them?
My fan fiction is based on the movie Ninja Assassin. It follows Raizo and the events that occur after the movie finishes.
As I climb these walls, the burden of the Ozunu clan dissipates into the ashes of the burned village I used to call home. As I reach the top of these walls, a feeling of content courses through my veins. Kiriko. My eyes can finally see the true beauty behind these walls.
The beauty of freedom.
As I look into the distance behind these walls that once confined me, memories of the past swarm my thoughts.
Ozunu. Family. Brotherhood. Pride. Honour.
Words that used to have meaning. Words that used to have substance. On top of these walls, I have taken my first breath of freedom to relinquish all grip that you had over me...
Ozunu...
I was orphaned as a child. You took me in with open arms. You raised me. You taught me life lessons. You were a father to me and in return I was a son to you. Even through the blistering training, the torture, the cuts and bruises, the pain was more bearable than the thought of failing you.
Family... Brotherhood...
We were your children. We were seeds of destruction, slowly blooming into weapons of assassination. You nurtured us in a way no normal child would have ever been raised. A family I had called my own. Brothers and sisters I had grown up with and endured pain with. You brainwashed us, you took our youth and fed us with your venomous lies. Something I could never forgive you for.
Pride... Honour...
Everything you taught me. Everything I believed in. You took that away from me. You took Kiriko away from me. What pride was there taking the life of one you call your own daughter? Was there any honour in your actions? Did you gain satisfaction? Taking your life, ending your corruption, this made me understand what true honour is.
With your blood on my blade... I have rid the world of your torment. I have destroyed Ozunu.
“Well, well, if it isn’t Raizo?” An eerie voice fills the silent air. A mysterious man shrouded in a Shinobi Shozoku suddenly appears at the foot of the walls.
“Who are...?”
The man abruptly interrupts, “How’s the view up there oh great Ozunu slayer?” His sarcasm was as sharp as his glare. He inhales deeply, “Ah! The fresh smell of freedom, don’t you just love it?”
I look at him blankly.
“Why so gloomy? You should be overjoyed! Put a smile on your face! You’re a hero!” The mysterious man starts to climb the wall. My face still dumbfounded, who is this person? How does he know my name? Is he an Ozunu?
“Who are you?” I question him.
“Me?” He smiles then answers, “Daisuke!” He says proudly. “Daisuke of the Akira Clan!”
I look at him with a puzzled stare. “Akira Clan?”
He slyly smirks, “Oh? Wow, your great father Ozunu didn’t tell you?” He bursts out in laughter. “You really were his prized treasure weren’t you? Raizo is so precious that his so called father didn’t even tell him that there were 8 other clans!” His laugh was menacing. “This is priceless. And you thought it was over too!”
“Absurd!” I state firmly.
“Absurd?” He folds his arms and shakes his head in disagreement. “You really do know nothing do you? Poor Raizo. I’m guessing you’re going to try kill us all?” He starts to snicker, “Good luck with that!”
Daisuke. Could what he be saying be the truth? 8 other ninja clans? It couldn’t be. Ozunu was the only one. Was it not? Had Ozunu not told me this in fear of my betrayal?
“So Raizo, thinking of your battle plan already? Hmmm?”
“Why are you here? Why are you telling me this?” He must have an ulterior motive. Why now after I have slain Ozunu?
“You want to know why?” He breaks into a sinister smile. “First of all, Ozunu is Lord Akira’s sworn enemy, so you practically saved us the trouble of killing the Ozunu clan ourselves!” He lifts his arm and points his finger at me. “Secondly, Lord Akira admires your talents; however, he knows you will never be swayed into joining us...”
“Does this mean you…” I question him.
He heckles like a hyena and cuts me off. “Hey! I haven’t finished yet!” He clears his throat and continues. “Ahem… thirdly!” His smile turns quickly into a cheeky grin. “Well I’m sure you can guess what thirdly would be. Let's just say Lord Akira doesn’t want any loose threads of the Ozunu hanging around.”
He shifts his right hand to his waist exposing his shurikens. “So… I’m sure you know what that means!” He throws a shuriken at me and I swiftly dodge it.
“Nice dodge!” He quickly unsheathes his katana and lunges towards me with three consecutive slashes. “Well, well, you do move fast don’t you?” He unleashes another slash.
I manoeuvre around his slashes maintaining balance on the wall. I let loose a kick and he looses grip of his katana. “Crap!” Daisuke quickly scurries towards the katana but I grab it before he can reach it.
“I don’t know who you are. I don’t know who Akira is. And I don’t know who these 8 clans are. But I will surely, kill you all… starting with you.” I impale his own katana into his chest. “Goodbye Daisuke.” I push his lifeless body into the deep forest below the walls of the Ozunu village.
Daisuke. Akira. Ninja Clans. My journey has just begun.
“Raizo?” I turn around and standing beneath the walls was Mika. “What are you doing up there?”
“Mika...” I look at her worried knowing I will have to protect her from the 8 ninja clans.
“What’s wrong?” Her troubled face questioned.
“It is not safe here. Ozunu is dead but there are still ninjas lurking in the shadows. I promise I will protect you. Your safety is now my priority.” I jump down from the walls and take her hand. "Let's go."
I could not protect Kiriko from death but I will surely protect Mika at any costs. Her life is now my life. I will rid the world of these fiends and their torment.
I will kill them all. I swear.
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Verity's Fanfic (final)
Little Red-Riding-Hood
Once there was a little village maiden, the prettiest cutest ever seen. Her grandmother was foolishly fond of her. Once the old woman made for her a red little hood out of velvet fabric, it fits the little girl just right. From that on, the girl always has the red little hood on her and that after she went by the name of Little Red-Riding-Hood.
One day the mother told Little Red-Riding-Hood to go see her grandmother who’s not well with a piece of cake and a pot of butter. Grandmother lives outside of the village far away at other side of the wood.
Little Red-Riding-Hood met her friend the great wolf after she enter the wood. Wolf came up and spoke to her politely.
“Hello, Little Red-Riding-Hood, how are you today?”
The little girl stopped and replied with a smile.
“I am very well, thank you Mr. Wolf.”
“Where are you going?” asked the wolf.
“I am going to see my grandmother and to take her a piece of cake and a pot of butter.” Little Red-Riding-Hood lifted up the cloth on the basket and showed it to the wolf. “Poor grandmother is not very well; hope she will get better soon.”
“…I see.” The wolf stopped for one second and asked again “Is it very far from here?”
“Oh yes, it is at the other side of the wood.”
The wolf frowned and thought for a while “Please take care on the way, I will go there first to inquire your grandmother and to tell her you are on the way to visit her.”
“Oh thank you so much Mr. Wolf, see you later.”
Then Wolf ran as fast as ever he could, took the shortest road, he has to get there before Little Red-Riding-Hood.
When Little Red-Riding-Hood arrived at grandmother’s place, the sky is almost dark. She knocked on the door and didn’t know it was the wolf who’s waiting for her inside, not her grandmother.
“Who is there?” said the wolf with his gruff voice, but Little Red-Riding-Hood felt it must because her poor grandmother had caught a very bad cold.
She answered cheerfully, “It is your child, Little Red-Riding-Hood, I brought you a cake and a pot of butter that mother had sent you.”
After Wolf had make sure it was Little Red-Riding-Hood’s voice, he softened his voice as much as he could and told her to come in.
Little Red-Riding-Hood opened the door and entered the house.
Wolf suddenly lowered his voice and whispered “Come to bed! Hurry!!
Little Red-Riding-Hood went near to the bed and surprised to found out it was Mr. Wolf on her grandmother’s bed.
“What are you doing here Mr. Wolf!? And where is my dear grandmother?”
“Shhhh….” Wolf whispered “don’t be loud, come in first and I will explain to you.”
Little Red-Riding-Hood nodded and climbed onto the bed. Wolf put the sheet over onto Little Red-Riding-Hood. After the two is fully hid under the sheet, Wolf finally started to speak.
“There is something I have to tell you.” Said the wolf in a shaking voice “Your grandmother is dead, I am very sorry.”
“……”Little Red-Riding-Hood was so shocked that her brain went blank and couldn’t say anything for quite a while “…this is not possible…” when she finally spoke again, her tears also falls along her voice.
“…I am sorry…” Wolf took Little Red-Riding-Hood in his arms and wiped away the tears on her face.
After Little Red-Riding-Hood had calmed down, Wolf held her hand and said “We need to get out of the wood as soon as possible.”
“Why?”
“The person who killed your grandmother is an evil witch; she looks for innocent children and captures them for sacrifice. And this time, her target is you.”
Little Red-Riding-Hood was so scared and almost begin to cry again. Wolf griped her hands tight and speak with strengthen in his eyes “Don’t worry, I will protect you and promises I will let you return home safely.”
Wolf had a quick peek at the windows and said again “I already killed the evil witch, right now is the hunter whose hiding outside the house is who we need to worry about. The hunter is helping the witch hunting little kids.”
Wolf and Little Red-Riding-Hood get out of the bed and crawly on the floor, carefully not to make any big sound.
Wolf and Little Red-Riding-Hood put their ears close to the door, and they could hear the hunter’s footsteps outside.
Wolf grabbed Little Red-Riding-Hood and hide her behind himself “I will attract the hunter’s attention, and you need to run as fast as you can, understand?”
Little Red-Riding-Hood shakes her head hard and sob “No, Mr. Wolf, I don’t want to leave you, it’s too dangerous.”
Wolf patted on Little Red-Riding-Hood’s head and smile “I will be ok, trust me. I promise I will meet you again tomorrow at the usual place.”
“…” Little Red-Riding-Hood nodded after a long pause, Wolf gave her a big hug.
“That’s my girl.”
Wolf opened the door and rush towards the hunter whose been waiting outside with a long gun.
“Run!!!” Wolf yelled out loud while fighting with the Hunter. Little Red-Riding-Hood ran so hard that she almost trip over a few times. She could not stopped crying, her tears blocked her sights, but she know she cannot stop running no matter what happen.
“BANG!!!”
A gunshot across the wood…
Jamie Fanfic FINAL
Voice: Kelly or Pam, your call.
Stu: No!
Voice: I guess I will take Kelly then.
(Stu looks towards Kelly. Red dot on Kelly’s forehead.)
Stu: NO!!!! Please don’t take Kelly!
Voice: OK then, PAM!
Stu: NO!! Don’t take Pam!!
(Gun cocks.)
Voice: (Angry.) You think I’m playing some kind of game with you? You think I’m not going to take their lives? You have one last chance to choose only ONE!!
(Stu squats down, starts sobbing)
Stu: Please don’t do this; it’s not their fault. Please, please, please.
Voice: (relaxes.) So now you are taking responsibilities? You admit that this is your fault?
Stu: (stops crying) Admit what? What is my fault? I haven’t done anything wrong!
Voice: You put yourself in this position; you are in this because of your lies.
Stu: (Stands up.) No. I am in the damn booth only because you had a gun and you killed a man that the police are accounting me for it.
Voice: Looks like you are still not ready to take responsibilities. All right, last call. Pam or Kelly? Kelly or Pam?
Stu: It’s not them you want. It’s me. You want me. Tell me what you want.
Voice: Oh. So now you are acting clever. I want only the truth. Confess to Kelly and that will save her life.
(Red dot shifts away from Kelly’s forehead)
Stu: What about Pam? You let her go too?
Voice: So you still care about Pam? That’s not a good thing to think of when you try to make a confession to Kelly. And don’t try to negotiate with me. CONFESS TO KELLY AND I WILL TELL YOU ABOUT PAM!
Stu: What if you lie?
Voice: Tell me you’ve got another choice.
(Stu looks to Kelly, then to Pam. Pam is worried. Kelly’s head down, fingers crossed.)
Stu: (whispers) I love you Kelly.
(Stu puts down the receiver, opens the booth door, and moves a step out.)
Stu: (shouts) KELLY!
(Kelly looks up. Ramey walks towards Stu.)
Ramey: (softly to his transceiver.) Hold it team. I want to know what he’s going to say.
Stu: (Still shouting) (Starts to cry) I LOVE YOU KELLY! But there are some things I need to tell you. Actually there is this man; he wants me to tell you something. I’ve been dishonest with you. I have cheated…
AHHHHHH!!
(A loud scream from the crowd, a man lying on the ground. Blood everywhere.)
Bystander:(desperate, shouting, crying) OH MY GOD!!! Someone got shot!!!!!!!
(Two police and four paramedics moved to the man, still breathing, they carried him onto the ambulance, sirens went off.)
(Kelly is shocked. Stu walks back in to the booth.)
(To transceiver.)
Team, we’ve got a sniper situation here.
(To sergeant.)
I want you to lead the rest of team to search every block in the shooting radius. Do it quickly and quietly. I don’t want the sniper to notice it.
(Sergeant walks off)
Stu: What the fuck you think you are doing? Who the fuck you think you are? You are such a FUCKING LOSER!
Voice: Be careful Stu, you hurt my feelings. And what did I say about being honest? You are not being honest to Kelly. And that is just a warning.
Stu: I DON’T CARE! Listen up you pathetic loser. I may have done something wrong but you are way worse. You think you can go around and kill people just for any fucking reasons you want? Fuck it, you bastard. I am not scared of you anymore. You wanna kill me? Go ahead and aim it right HERE!! (Stu points his finger to his temple.)
(Stu hangs up the phone and walks out the booth.)
Stu: KELLY! I LOVE YOU!! There are so many things I need to tell you but I am not gonna to tell you right now. Just remember my love stays even if I am dead. I love you so much Kelly, but I am not worthy of you. (Bursts in tears.) I live on my lies. I am capable of nothing. I wear these expensive shoes, watch and suits because beneath them, I felt I am nothing. I’m too scared to show anyone the real me. I put on disguises and I lie to everyone on everything. It became so much of a habit I don’t notice it. But believe me Kelly when I say I love you. I love you.
(Kelly starts to cry) (Shouts to Stu)
Kelly: Shut up Stu, you are not going to die. I love you.
(Stu turns to face Pam, still sobbing.)
Stu: Kelly, this is Pam. I am sorry Pam. Kelly is my wife and I love her. I am so sorry.
(Pam walks off, tears on her face but she forces a smile on her face.)
(Stu walks 2 steps. Receives a shot on the shoulder. Lies down on the ground.)
Kelly: STU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Kelly runs to him.)(Paramedics run to him.)(Police run to him.)(The paramedics try to lift Stu onto the gurney.)
Ramey: Kelly, come back!! It’s too dangerous!!
(To transceiver)
Team, Stu was shot. Find the sniper, find him NOW!!!
(Medics push Stu into the ambulance.)
(The ambulance drives off.)
(Ramey knocks and walks in)
Ramey: Stu, I am sorry. But he killed himself with a knife before we can get a name out of him. But we’ve got a photo for you. (Ramey shows a photo of a middle-aged white male.) Do you know this man?
(Stu shocks his head. Sighs and closes his eyes.)
(Kelly stands up.)
Kelly: Thank you Captain. He just needs some rests.
(Ramey walks out the door.)
Stu: Kelly, you know what, I’m glad and thankful for getting shot actually. I might lose you otherwise. I might not realize how much you weigh in my life…
first draft...
first draft
it isn't much but it's something to keep the ball rolling...idea's and feed are much appreciated :)
let me know your thoughts.
“I'm gonna be the main eventLike no king was beforeI'm brushing up on looking downI'm working on my roar”Simba : “Uncle Scar did you hear…I’m going to become the new King of the Pride Lands..”Simba prancing around with his chest out and his head held high with his sparkly grin showing Scar how excited he is.Scar : “Simba...” Simba too excited to hear him he continues to talk to himself bout this exciting news that he has…Simba : with a low voice thinking that he wasn’t being heard… “oh wow how exciting is that…me being king…standing in front of all our the other animals, giving out orders…ooh how great this will be”Looking Simba up and down whilst he prances around celebrating to himself..scar decides to interrupt..Scar: “Simba I don’t meant to be a kill joy…but what makes you think that your Father will be standing down from the throne any time soon…I mean after all he must die before you take your rightful place as King…” Monday, August 15, 2011
My Fan Fiction Reviews
This is a fanfic about one of my favorite anime called Ga-Rei. The writer writes from one of the main character Yomi’s point of view, describes and magnifies her thoughts and feels especially the dark side deep in her heart. And the other main character Kagura turned into a killer and killed all the people who will threaten Yomi’s life. It all began with Kagura’s love to Yomi, but it turns to a bad result that Kagura couldn’t stop killing, and it end up everyone around Yomi was gone, and Gagura really gone crazy. Her love to Yomi was out of control. The author really captured the mood of the anime and reflects on this fanfic, I really like the story deeply portrayed the main idea of the original anime with a different storyline.
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Veer
Base on anime –Macross Frontie-
This is a fanfic worte about what happened from episode 12 of the anime Macross Frontier. It about Ranka and Alto, which is not a popular match in fanfcs of Macross Frontier. It is something really trivial between two people. It is not about great love or romance but something light and ambiguity. There are no kissing or hugging, but simple words between each other and casualness smiles. When Alto holding his hand out to Ranka at last, although it’s just a little move, but it actually contains lots emotions, care and love. The story is really sweet, and it shows sometimes what’s deep between twos doesn’t need show in forms, just stay by each other’s side.
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Base on anime –Baccano!-
This is a fanfic about Eve and Dallas of the anime Baccano. Is a story about a girl who’s looking for her brother. The original story is suspense, this fan fic simulated, what will happened if the brother did not captured by the criminal syndicate, sent to test in experiment, and also this girl had a successful negotiation with the bad guy who drown her brother into the lake. This which created a total different moves base on the original story. And I really enjoy it, the plot was really interesting and fascinating. It tells the readers, the deep bonding between families. No matter what happen and how her brother is degenerated, they are still brother and sister, still family. She would still go look for him and trust him. This story tells nothing can exchange the family bonds.
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Base on comic –Clover-
This is a fanfic about Gingetsu and Ran in one of Clamp’s comic Clover. The death of Ran had wake up Gingetsu’s feeling to Ran. Although the emotion between two people is not obvious, it seems it is very light and blur. But what really links them together is something so deep and heavy that they both never reveals. And when they both finally realized and admitted everything just too later. Five years was too short, therefore it is also unreal and sad. Life was hard for Gingetsu, and it will be even worse without Ran, the despair of Gingetsu to Ran’s death really made me feel said…
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Tick Tock
Base on anime –Code Geass-
This is a yaoi fanfic of Code Geass about the main character Lelouch and his forgery little brother Rolo. Rolo was a spy, but he ended up falling love with Lelouch, but he knew that he is nothing to Lelouch, he can never be his family, he is just a fake brother, and he decide to become Lelouch’s most valuable tool, just want to stay by his side no matter in what way. And it is a sad story, it doesn’t talks about what happed when Rolo sacrifice himself to protect Lelouch, but it probably ends up with Lelouch finally realize he actually love Rolo but it is just too late after he had been using and playing Rolo and did not notice his true feeling until the last minute.
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Sheldon - Teen wolf fan fic draft
This fanfic follows the latest episode in which Alyson’s dad finally discover who the other Bata wolf is. Scott is cornered by the vampire he is torn to a decision to either die a human or fight for his life as a werewolf – with the fear of losing Allison’s heart as she helplessly watches on.
It’s that time of the year, where every girl from school puts on her dress preparing to live out the dream of her entire high school experience. That time of the year where the boys suit up all spunky in hopes of getting a little action with the ladies as it maybe their last chance in high school - The annual school Formal Ball/Prom.
Alyson and Scott are walking thru the backstage foolishly kissing and groping on each other as young couples do when they’re in love. They eventually reach a spot where they can be intimate as they approach the old school buses. She runs on ahead into the bus teasing him of what’s to come. As she gazes upon him from the bus waiting in anticipation, two bright high beam car lights come from both ends of the bus. Facing directly towards Scott who is just standing there unaware of what’s going to happen next. As both 4WD’s begin to rev up their engines the tensed emotions begin to spark.
Alyson looks on frighten of what’s going on fearing her love could possible lose his life, while Scott looks back and fourth at her and the two drivers as if he has everything under control. Suddenly in a moment both hunters take their feet off the break and slamming onto the accelerators. With Scott cornered in, having no where to run – both cars jam up in between the two buses scrapping the side skirts of the 2 4wd’s
Just before they collide and crash furiously, Scott’s heart rate had already breached the limit of a normal human being activating his inner beast. So as the cars collide he leaps high in the air, both cars missing him by less the half a second – forcing both 4wd’s to crash with him landing on top of both cars. Only for his werewolf form to take shape, revealing his true self to Allyson who is shocked, emotionally distraught and confused. Confused about that the love of her life is the very thing/creature that her family has been hunting for centuries.
To her amazement Alyson steers at him, gripped with fear of the fact that her boyfriend (the first person she’s has ever fallen in love with) is well and truly not human but a Werewolf.
Scott helplessly looks at her in his Werewolf state only to slowly turn back to normal as his heart rate drops back as he sees her (the only one that can keep his abilities intact.)
He whispers to her the only words that could possibly keep her love for him intact
“I LOVE YOU”
She looks at him with tear filled eyes, putting her hand up against the window glass while he Leaps off into the darkness just before her dad and the other hunters shot him with their deadly bullets.
Allyson filled with emotion, slowly walks out the bus very drowsy still in shock of what she just witnessed. Faintly drops into her fathers arms who whispers to her
“It’s going to be ok”
As he looks out into the distance with only one thing on his mind – Kill Scott McColl.
As the night eventually fades away, Scott – not knowing what to do, flees to the forest (the place where he was first bitten)
he begins to holler and shout
“NO”
in pain thinking that Alyson hates him after seeing the beast, as his frustration builds, all the screaming and hollering starts to grow into howling.
Meanwhile Alyson and her father drive home from the school. Her father tries to explain what happened and begins to give her a big lecture on how dangerous Scott is and warns her to stay away from him. Subtly ignoring him, she slips into her own little world. Looking out the window replaying what just happen, over and over again. She begins to question herself . . .
Why didn’t he tell me?
He’s a liar!
Do I still Love him?
Arghh how can I love him when he’s a Warewolf?
Is he really the same Scott?
All these thoughts start to run in her mind . . . .
Sunday, August 7, 2011
Fanfic Draft
As I climb these walls, the burden of the Ozunu clan dissipates into the ashes of the burned village I used to call home. As I reach the top of these walls, a feeling of content courses through my veins. Kiriko. My eyes can finally see the true beauty behind these walls.
The beauty of freedom.
As I look into the distance behind these walls that once confined me, memories of the past swarm my thoughts.
Ozunu. Family. Brotherhood. Pride. Honour.
Words that used to have meaning. Words that used to have substance. On top of these walls, I have taken my first breath of freedom to relinquish all grip that you had over me...
Ozunu...
I was orphaned as a child. You took me in with open arms. You raised me. You taught me life lessons. You were a father to me and in return I was a son to you. Even through the blistering training, the torture, the cuts and bruises, the pain was more bearable than the thought of failing you.
Family... Brotherhood...
We were your children. We were seeds of destruction, slowly blooming into weapons of assassination. You nurtured us in a way no normal child would have ever been raised. A family I had called my own. Brothers and sisters I had grown up with and endured pain with. You brainwashed us, you took our youth and fed us with your venomous lies. Something I could never forgive you for.
Pride... Honour...
Everything you taught me. Everything I believed in. You took that away from me. You took Kiriko away from me. What pride was there taking the life of one you call your own daughter? Was there any honour in your actions? Did you gain satisfaction? Taking your life, ending your corruption, this made me understand what true honour is.
With your blood on my blade... I have rid the world of your torment. I have destroyed Ozunu.
Thursday, August 4, 2011
My Movie Fan Fiction Reviews
The True End
I enjoyed reading this fan fiction, it was short but sweet. I liked the idea that the Author portrayed in this fan fiction. It did not stray from the movie's main idea and surely pleased fans who wanted to see what would happen if Tom and Summer ever crossed paths again. The idea the Author tried to project was that even though you do not find true love the first time, there is a great possibility it will come by you another time. And never leave a door unopened because you will never know whats on the other side unless you open it.
Wednesday, July 27, 2011
Movie Fanfic Reviews
This is another fan fiction of Phonebooth. In this fan fiction, Avery became the main character. She was at home alone on her birthday hoping that someone will call and wish her a happy birthday. The caller disguised himself as an UPS delivery man. He delivered an anonymous package to her to see her reactions. The caller did not kill her because she treated the delivery man friendly. Avery did not hung up the phone even when the caller did not response when she answered it. The caller even said happy birthday to her in the end.
This is a really simple story and it contrasts strongly to the original movie. I think that the caller will not attempt to kill Stu if he received the pizza. Just like in this fan fiction, the caller did not kill Avery because she was kind to the delivery man. But I doubt that the caller would show himself up to test someone. But it is still acceptable since this is a story that goes to a completely different direction to the movie.
In this fan fiction, Po had developed a relationship with Tigress. He went up the hill and met Shifu. He wanted to ask Shifu a question but he was too nervous to speak it out. After Shifu said it would be fine just to ask it, Po asked if he could marry Tigress. Shifu laughed and said of course he can. They then walked down the path together to the palace.
I liked the way how this fan fiction was written. It uses the same speaking manner for the characters as in the original film. Also adopting the same settings, it makes the story so real that it seemed like a real scene in the movie.
"Trouble? What trouble? W-who's upset? I'm not upset! Is it so hard to believe that I would want to …you know…um… meditate with my Kung Fu master…or whatever…?" He said, giving a nervous chuckle. "Maybe I just like to… uhh… chill out every once and awhile; even awesome dragon warriors have to-"
Po actually used this dialogue in the first film. So this fan fiction really caught the essence of different characters in the original film.
This is a fan fiction about Sherlock Holmes. Watson run out of the house after an argument with Holmes. He entered a Hanson cab and give blind directions just to stay away from Holmes. He ended up going back to where he was because he was always drawn close to Holmes. Holmes came downstairs and saw Watson. He tried to stop Watson's cab but twisted his ankle instead. Watson was worried about him and came out of the cab. When they were both back in the room, Holmes told Watson that he had read his journal about falling in love with him. Watson was annoyed and angry because his deepest secrets were revealed. Holmes asked Watson to stay and confessed that he love him as well. Watson left because he thought that Holmes is a sociopath with no emotions.
I like the idea to portray Holmes as a sociopath because he seemed to have no emotions. The language used in the fan fiction is very appropriate. It makes the story realistic. Watson had emotions toward Holmes that went beyond friendship. But he knew what is good for both of them and he walked away when Holmes said he loves him. The story had a sad ending but it makes the story more interesting because I was expecting a happy ending for this kind of fan fiction.
This is an additional scene from the movie. Bourne and Marie were in a Paris hotel and Bourne started to think about his past and identity. He was saved in the middle of Mediterranean sea. His memory started from there. He could not recall any of his past. There are people wanting to kill him and he had dragged an innocent girl in. He had to figure out who he was to survive. The film did not show his thoughts much. In this scene, Bourne started to gather all his thoughts and facts about himself and think about what would happen next.
This scene gave an inner view of Bourne. All those thoughts written are very appropriate and I definitely agree that Bourne would be thinking about all these. This scene is like a bonus in a movie or an interview of the character. It backs up the whole story and added more personal emotions to it. I really like the idea of writing a scene about characters' self reflecting.